Second Bad Reaction

Second bad review, or rather I suppose I should say negative response. So far I have (I think) some 22 or 23 people who have actually READ "Give Me The Night" in its entirety, only one of whom is male to my knowledge. The negative reactions both came from women, one of whom says my sentences are too long, and the second one (who admits she did not complete the novel) essentially said that my vampire repulsed her and freaked her out, which I get. No kidding, ladies, this one ain't Twilight or anything remotely close.